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The Secret War 10 page challenge

FADE IN: EXT. VILLAGE - NIGHT SUPER: 1940. Occupied Poland. A long dirt road cuts through small fields and gardens. It leads to a small village that sits against the backdrop of a dense forest A RUMBLE. From within the forest, a row of German half-tracks appear and rumble towards the gates of the small village. At the head of the infantry division, a jeep speeds ahead. The jeep slows down and stops. THREE VILLAGERS, pitchforks and torches in hand, block the way. The door opens and a GERMAN SS COMMANDER steps out. A Black Sun pendant hangs around his neck and is tucked inside by black-gloved hands. The SS Commander is RUDOLPH, 40 s, tall, black eyes, weathered face. He is flanked by SS SOLDIERS, guns drawn., a middle-aged farmer, steps forward to greet him. There are no Jews here. You know why I am here. We have done nothing wrong. Leave us be. Let us through or we will force our way. Oscar spits on his shoe. Heiss takes out his pistol and shoots the other two Villagers in the head. No!

2. Heiss turns and walks back to his jeep. SS Soldiers grab the bodies, slide them to the side of the road and pull open the gates. Oscar watches as the jeep and half-tracks drive into the village square. EXT. VILLAGE SQUARE - NIGHT SS Soldiers have rounded up the VILLAGERS and they stand in a huddle. Heiss turns to Oscar, who stands at gun point. Where is she? I don t know who you speak of? Heiss turns to SS Sergeant, HANS VOGEL, mid-20 s, eager to please. He nods his head and Vogel points to a line of SOLDIERS. The soldiers grab random men from the huddle of villagers and line them up against the side of a barn. Please. Where is she? She is not here. I promise. So be it. Fire! VOGEL The soldiers lift their rifles and FIRE. The line of villagers fall down dead. Oscar falls to his knees. Oscar cries. I ll give you one more chance.

3. (to the Vogel) The women. The soldiers pull women from the group and line them up against the bloody barn. They SCREAM, CRY, WHIMPER. At the end of the row,, a young brunette stands. She has long brown hair, slim, pretty. She looks at the SS Soldiers and then to Oscar and Heiss. (To Oscar) No? Fine. Stop! (O.C.) Heiss, Oscar and Vogel look to the huddle of men, women and children., a Polish woman, mid-40 s, with curly black hair and dressed in black garb, steps forward. Leave them be. Heiss turns to her. You are her? Yes. Then show me. What? Prove yourself to me and we will leave this place without burning it to the ground. Anna looks nervous. She looks around; all the faces, including Helene, stare back. Sergeant?

4. The execution squad raise their rifles. The guns point to the women in the lineup. Anna looks over at the women. Kill them. Fire! VOGEL Suddenly all of the lights in the village square blow out. The jeep headlights explode, the half-track headlights explode, gas lanterns explode. Only the flicker of torches light up the village square. The women in the lineup cower together in a huddle. No shots are fired. Very impressive. (to Vogel) Take her. Yes, sir. VOGEL Two SS GUARDS grab Anna and drag her away. VOGEL And the rest? Take them to the barn and burn it. You promised! And kill the peasant fool. Vogel pulls out his pistol and executes Oscar on the spot. The remaining villagers are pushed towards the entrance of the barn. Helene breaks free and runs over to Oscar. The butt-end of a rifle slams into her back and she falls to her knees. Move! SS SOLDIER

5. The soldier grabs her and drags her to the stable. INT. JEEP - MOMENTS LATER The jeep peels away from the small village. Heiss sits in the passenger seat. Anna sits in the back. She looks over her shoulder as flames lick up the sides of the barn. She pulls out a necklace and holds it tight. With eyes closed, she whispers something over and over. Tears streak down her cheeks. INT. BARN - CONTINUOUS The villagers stand in the middle of the smoky, dark barn. Children CRY. Mothers WEEP. Men bash on the doors, but they are locked tight. The smoke fills the place. In the middle of the huddle, on her knees, is Helene. She comforts a SMALL CHILD. CHILD Please. I can t breathe. The men SHAKE and PULL on the doors. PETR, a large framed man, still in his butcher s apron, appears in front of Helene. PETR This is your fault, Helene. Do something! Me?! Petr grabs her and pushes her to the front doors. PETR Please. For my son. He holds the small child in his arms. I don t know what to do.

6. Men bash the doors. Please! I didn t ask for this! She falls to the floor in a COUGH. The smoke is everywhere. Flames appear at the back walls. The crowd push forward. She presses up against the doors, closes her eyes and whispers. Please. She presses her head against the door. There is a CRACK. The door shudders. Suddenly, the doors BURST open in a splintering CRACK. EXT. BARN - CONTINUOUS The men, women and children escape the flames. The last person to exit is Helene. Dumbfounded, she looks at the doors that lay on the dirt floor. Broken chains are scattered all around. She picks up a piece of the metal, sheered in half. EXT. AUSTRIAN MOUNTAIN RANGE - CASTLE - DAY Nazi cars and trucks arrive and depart through the gates of a giant castle, now fortified with a German SS division. Nazi flags drape over openings and castle walls. INT. CASTLE ROOM - DAY A large table sits in the center of an empty room. The door opens and an SS GUARD enters. Behind, dressed in ragged clothes, is a bruised and battered Anna. The guard drags her to a chair, sits her down and then exits. Anna sniffs and cries to herself.

7. A moment later, the door swings open and Heiss marches in. He has a rolled map under his arm. He unrolls it and places it on the table. It s a map of Europe. Again. I can t. Heiss pulls out his leather gloves and slides them on each hand. Anna shirks back from him. Tell me again. There are more like you. Tell me where they are. I don t know. Heiss grabs her hair and pulls it back. He looks down at her. I know there are more. And I will find them. Where are they? Heiss forces her head down against the map. I don t know. Please. I don t know. Heiss releases his grip, turns and walks away from her. He opens the door and exits. As he steps outside, a large SS PRISON GUARD enters. No. Please. Anna gets up and scampers to the back wall. The Guard walks towards her with a smirk on his face. EXT. VILLAGE - GRAVEYARD - DAY A row of freshly packed dirt mounds line the front of a small graveyard. Helene reaches down and places a wreath of flowers on a large mound.

8. She turns to face a group of VILLAGERS. TOMASZ, a grey haired, middle-aged man steps forward. TOMASZ Helene. We are sorry for your lose. Thank you. TOMASZ We have talked, all of us, and we believe it is best you move on. What? Petr, the man from the barn, pushes forward. PETR You re not welcome here anymore. Your family is a curse on this village. He spits at her feet. My father died trying to protect this town. PETR Oscar died protecting you! These mounds. These innocent people are dead because of your family. But. TOMASZ We will give you a horse and cart for your things. But you must leave. PETR This is no place for a witch. Petr! TOMASZ Petr turns and storms away. Tomasz tries to console Helene. He reaches out to rub her hand. Helene turns and flees.

9. INT. OFFICE HALLWAY - DAY SUPER: Manchester, England. An OFFICER runs down a hallway, slides to a stop and enters a door. INT. OFFICE - DAY MAJOR WALTER SMITH, 60 s, burly, red-cheeked, sits patiently at his desk. He looks up at MAJOR ROBERT, a pencilthin man, who paces back and forth. The door swings open and CAPTAIN DOUGLAS, Scottish, mid- 20 s, athletic, chiseled face, enters. Sorry, sir. Was delayed on the flight back. SMITH Captain, I d like you to meet- Barnes interrupts him. Ewan takes a seat. Major Barnes. Please have a seat. I ve read in your records that you recently escaped your second capture by German forces? Third, actually. Three. Right then. What I am more interested in, is your seemingly efficient ability to find yourself behind enemy lines. Sir? Major Smith pulls out a file folder and slides it over to Ewan.

10. SMITH Your name has been put forth, Captain. A search and retrieve mission of upmost importance to the war efforts. What is it? We need you to go behind enemy lines and smuggle someone out. Ewan opens the file folder and scans the notes. How far? Poland. Maybe Austria. Jesus. Ewan scans the file. Who is he? It s a she. A she? Yes. Here. Barnes hands Ewan a folded photograph. It has come to light that this individual has some special talents that could aid the war effort. And she may currently be in the hands of Nazi Germany. Ewan unfolds the photograph to reveal a faded picture of Helene. Ewan looks up at the men.