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1 EXT. DIRT ROAD - DAY We OPEN on a dusty dirt road in the middle of nowhere. A truck drives passed heading down the dirt road. We watch it for a few beats and then: EXT. WAREHOUSE BACKLOT - DAY The truck pulls up to the back of the warehouse. The DRIVER gets out of the truck. He's wearing a hat, covering his face. He hits the side of the truck, waking up whatever is in the back of the warehouse. INT. WAREHOUSE - DARK STORAGE ROOM - CONTINUOUS A dark storage room. A few lights hang from the ceiling. A floor fan is running to cool down the room, appearing HOT. A door OPENS. Two ROADIE THUGS drag three young men, wearing their clothing, dirty and roughed up, into the storage room. Stand there against the wall, and don't move. The three men stand there. Intimidated by the Roadie. Trying to remain calm during this time. Roadie 2 walks over to the men, holding a beer bottle in his hand. He taunts them and SPITS beer on them. What are we going to do with 'em? I say we let 'em stand there for awhile. Scare 'em good. Roadie 1 walks over to the older of the three - is dirty and sweaty, appearing roughed up. Roadie 1 yanks Eddie with harsh grip towards the center of the storage room. He takes off the blindfold. Eddie looks around to see where he is at and where his brothers are located. Roadie 1 grabs hold of Eddie's face, pulling his focus back on him. Your brothers are fine. You should (MORE)

2 (CONT'D) be worried about yourself right now. Why are you doing this? I don't even know you. Roadie 1 smirks with an evil grin. He slams a fist into Eddie's gut. Eddie struggles to gain composure from the punch. I didn't ask you a question. So don't answer. Now we find out which one of you owes the money, and we do that by playing a simple game. Roadie 2 walks over to Eddie, getting in his face. Uncomfortably too close. We're going to push you to the limits and the first one to crack gets our mercy. Just tell me which one owes the money and we can go from there. (beat, staring at Eddie) Let's play a game. Eddie stands back, possibly because of the SPIT coming from the Roadies mouth. Let's see who can hit the hardest. Eddie frowns. Worried. I'll even let you go first. Roadie 2 pulls up his shirt, revealing his stomach. Smiling and waiting for Eddie to take a swing at his gut. Eddie looks over at Roadie 1 and then his brothers. He looks back at Roadie 2, getting ready to take a swing. And he swings a punch into the Roadie's gut - it doesn't even budge the Roadie. He chuckles at Eddie, letting his shirt drop.

3 My turn. Eddie braces himself. Wincing from the possible blow to his stomach. Roadie 2 smiles, pulling back his fist and SLAMMING it directly into Eddie's gut. The air exhales from Eddie, almost dropping to his knees. Roadie 1 and 2 both laugh at Eddie and him struggling. Eddie struggles to stand, getting ready for a second shot. One more chance. You almost went down on that one. I kind of thought you would last longer. Eddie doesn't even wait. Eddie throws a second punch. Harder. It pushes the Roadie back a little. Nice try. Roadie 2 smirks. Upset that Eddie got a good shot in. He quickly shoots his second shot into Eddie's gut, knocking him back. He drops to his knees, grabbing his gut. Wheezing in pain. Roadie 2 grabs hold of Eddie, picking him up almost LIMP in the Roadie's grip. Which one owes the money. Tell me and it ends now. You can save you from any other torment. Eddie doesn't say a word. Roadie 2 throws a punch into Eddie's gut. The Roadie smiles, enjoying the torment. He goes to punch him again, but Roadie 1 walks over to stop him. Roadie 2 takes Eddie back over to the wall with his brothers. Eddie slides down the wall, sitting on the floor possibly falling over. Still in pain. Roadie 2 picks up the second brother - HUNTER. He struggles when the Roadie grabs him, trying to break free from his grip. Cocky. His face is sweaty and dirty from being in the hot room.

4 HUNTER Let me go. Let. Me. Go. The Roadie rips off the blindfold, grabbing hold of Hunter's chin, making him focus on his face. Stop struggling or make it worse. The Roadie lets go of Hunter. Hunter looks over towards Eddie and his other brother. HUNTER You wanna hit someone? Hit me. Hunter taunts the Roadie to try and hit him, but the Roadie just laughs at Hunter, staring at Hunter. Roadie 1 starts to walk around Hunter, looking up and down his body. Have you ever heard the statement, unwrapping the twinkie? Hunter laughs at the idea, but doesn't really know what the Roadie is talking about. Hunter looks around for any possible escape. Are you looking for a way out? Where would you go? Find help? Roadie 2 walks up behind Hunter, grabbing hold of him in a tight controlling hold. Hunter struggles and Roadie 1 SMACKS Hunter the face. Hunter calms down. Roadie 1 reaches down and unbuckles Hunter's belt. Hunter looks down at what Roadie 1 is doing, struggling just a little bit. Roadie 1 takes the belt off Hunter, throwing it on the floor. Roadie 1 takes out a knife. He takes hold of the shirt and begins cutting shirt, ripping it off Hunter's body. Roadie 1 runs his finger over Hunter's stomach, eventually landing on the waistband of his pants. Time to unwrap this twinkie. Hunter now understands the comment, beginning to struggle

5 again, knowing that something bad is about to happen. HUNTER Back off. Get off me. Roadie 1 reaches down and unzips Hunter's pants, slowly pulling them down to Hunter's knees. Hunter is defeated by feeling exposed. Let's see what we have. Roadie 1 reaches over, grabbing hold of the waistband, pulling it back and he looks down to see the junk. The game for you is going to be different. And remember all you have to do is just tell me who owes the money. You wanna tell me anything? Hunter winces in regret. Not saying a word. Roadie 1 goes over for a weapon of choice. Bend him over the table. Roadie 2 forces Hunter over to the table, forcing him to bend over the table. Roadie 2 holds his hands. Roadie 1 walks over to the table, holding a police baton. Roadie 1 pulls down Hunter's underwear. He forces Hunter to spread his legs. Roadie 1 moves the police baton around Hunter's body. Tormenting Hunter as he pleads for his life. The Roadie places the tip of the baton on Hunter's butt and then: ON HUNTER'S FACE The Roadie SHOVES the baton - you know where - and the PAIN covers Hunter's face. Torment. The Roadie pushes and pulls the baton for several beats and then-- Now back on the scene, He pulls it out, dropping the baton on the ground. Leaving Hunter in pain and exhausted. Hunter lays there in agony. Roadie 1 walks over to where the last brother is still

6 standing. Eddie looks over at the Roadie 1. Leave him be. Roadie 1 points his finger at Eddie. Shut your mouth Or what? Roadie 1 starts moving over towards Eddie, reaching into his pocket, pulling out a knife. He places the blade on Eddie's face. Forcing him to stand. Eddie stands. Get up. Undress. No. (shocked) The Roadie places the blade on Eddie's neck. Take your clothes off now. Eddie begins with his shirt. Roadie 2 walks over to Hunter, picking him up, forcing him over towards Josh. He pushes him towards Josh. (at Josh) Give him a hand job. Josh looks at the Roadie in disgust, pulling back and refusing to do anything. Roadie 2 swings a PUNCH into Josh's gut, causing Josh to stumble back. Josh quickly gains composure, lunging towards the Roadie, jumping on his back. The Roadie swings and turns around, trying to get Josh off him. He pushes himself back towards the wall, smashing Josh

7 against the wall - THUD! Eddie unbuckles his belt, taking it off and removing his pants, revealing his black boxers he is wearing. He waits, wanting to stop. Roadie 1 watches Eddie. Waiting. Are you done? I don't think so. Josh gains his composure. Looking over at Eddie. Even more mad. Josh finds a screwdriver. He turns back towards the Roadie, lunging forward - He shoves the screwdriver into the Roadie's neck. Blood spews. The Roadie drops to his knees, holding his neck. Gasping. He falls forward, landing in the puddle of blood. Dead. Roadie 1 is shocked. He walks over towards Hunter, forcefully picking him up. He places an arm around Hunter's neck. Squeezing hard. Hunter is gagging for air. Josh looks over at the situation still holding the bloody screwdriver. Drop it or your brother is mine. Hunter continues to struggle. Roadie 3 (The person from the opening scene that was driving the truck) walks into the storage room and sneaking up behind Josh. He grabs hold of Josh, violently tossing him around. He drops the screwdriver. He takes Josh over to where Hunter and the Roadie are. Roadie 1 drops Hunter to the ground. Josh is now standing in front of him - Roadie 1 waits and then PUNCHES Josh on face then his gut. Roadie 1 takes it out on Josh for killing his partner. He starts being forceful with Josh, taking off his clothes. Ripping and tearing. Wrestling and pushing. Rough. Roadie 3 walks over to Hunter. Roadie 1 forces Josh to watch as the new Roadie takes a

8 knife and begins to STAB Hunter in the stomach - ONE - TWO - THREE quick stabs to the stomach. Hunter drops lifeless to the ground. Bloody. Josh is tormented by what he sees. Eddie feels helpless as he watches, standing there in his boxers. Roadie 1 grabs hold of Josh, pushing him back against the wall. He reaches around Josh's neck. Squeezing hard. His face growing RED in pain. Stop. It was me. I'm the one that owes the money. Roadie 1 continues to squeeze the life out of Josh. Roadie 3 walks over to Eddie. Eddie backs up trying to get away. He backs up against the wall. Roadie 3 reaches out, grabbing Eddie through his underwear. Squeezing hard. Eddie eventually fights back, pushing Roadie 3 back. Eddie looks desperately for a way out. He moves quickly towards a door, looking back seeing Hunter lying dead on the floor and Josh is dropping to the ground. Dead. Eddie is frozen, but heads out the door. EXT. WAREHOUSE BACKLOT - DAY Eddie is still in his boxers. He runs down the dirt road, trying to get away. All of sudden - A shot RINGS out - knocking Eddie to his knees - A second shot RINGS out - knocking Eddie down. Dead. After a few beats of seeing Eddie on the ground. Blood coming out his mouth. We see a shadow moving close to Eddie. FADE TO BLACK.