Alliance Primary School, Sheung Shui A Collection of Students Writing 2 nd Term

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1 Alliance Primary School, Sheung Shui A Collection of Students Writing 2 nd Term

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3 Preface Congratulations to our students! Their enthusiasm for writing gave birth to this heartfelt collection. We can t help but show our appreciation of them. We hope that you enjoy reading it and share a great sense of achievement with our lovely and energetic students. Last but by no means least, there s no doubt that; Alliance s writers are Progressive in different aspects, Sincere at heart, Sensible in thought, and Sunny in character. It s time for us to turn the page and say Hooray! English Panel

4 CONTENT 1. Legoland P.1 2. School P.1 3. My New Clothes P.2 4. Having a Picnic P.2 5. My New Clothes P.3 6. Having a Picnic P.3 7. My Busy Sunday P.4 8. An Exciting Day in APSSS P.4 9. A Happy Day P A Happy Day P Let s Take Care of Hong Kong P A Happy Day P A Poor Cat P Naughty Lily P Ben and May P Naughty Lily P New Story of Hansel and Gretel P New Story of Hansel and Gretel P New Story of Three Little Pigs P New Story of Three Little Pigs P Birthday Resolution P Birthday Resolution P New Story of Snow White P Birthday Resolution P Super Cleaning Robot P Super Schoolbag P Talking TV P Super Bowl P Phone Headphones P in 1 Watercolour Pencil P An Unforgettable Experience P An Argument between Gigi and Amy P Let s Protect the Environment in Hong Kong! P My Most Memorable Experience with My Family P Friendship Forever P A Great Friend P.32

5 1A Hugo Legoland I am going to Legoland. I can see a lot of Lego bricks. I can hear people talking about Lego. I can taste yummy hamburgers. I can smell hotdogs. I can touch Lego models and Lego friends. I feel wonderful! 1A Kaidence School I am going to school. I can see teachers. I can hear children singing. I can taste water. I can smell the flowers. I can touch the wall. I feel cheerful! 1

6 1B Purple My New Clothes Look at me. My gown is pink, purple and yellow. My high heels are red. My crown is purple, red and yellow. My necklace is blue. My socks are pink. I like my grown best. 1B Jacky Having a Picnic Today is a cloudy day. The children are having a picnic in the park. Jonathan and I are running. Steven and Joe are skipping. Hayley is playing on a swing. Sandy is playing on a slide. Phoebe is playing on a see-saw. Sita is hot. She is eating ice cream. We feel excited! 2

7 1C Tiffany My New Clothes Look at me. My gown is pink, purple, red and yellow. My clip is blue and orange. My crown is yellow, red, pink and purple. My necklace is yellow, pink, red and green. My high heels are red. My earrings are purple. I like my gown best. 1C Katrina Having a Picnic Today is a sunny day. The children are having a picnic in the park. Tom and I are singing near the pond. Khalil and Peter are playing on the see-saw. Elsa and Anna are playing with a ball. Elaine is drawing a tree on the slide. Kitty Lo is thirsty. She is drinking cola. Angel Yu is hungry. She is eating hotdogs. We feel excited! 3

8 2A Harold Wong My Busy Sunday I did many things last Sunday. On Sunday morning, I watched TV at home. I did homework at half past eleven. On Sunday afternoon, I played football at half past two. I played ipad games at home. On Sunday evening, I played with my toys at half past seven. I played chess at home. I had a busy day. 2A Andrew Chan An Exciting Day in APSSS Last year, the minions went to Alliance Primary School, Sheung Shui. They had English lessons with 2A children. At recess, they ate yummy food. At the third recess, they went to the computer room and played computer games. After that, Ironman heard the children and saw the computer. We went to the computer room and showed them hero films. They felt wonderful and excited. 4

9 2B Adrian Chan A Happy Day Last Sunday, I went to Ocean Park with my family by bus. It was a hot day, so we ate some ice-cream. We rode bikes around the park. It was fun. We walked on a trail to see the animals. We watched a dolphin show. They swam and jumped in the pool. It was exciting. At noon, we had a buffet lunch. The food was nice. We went home by bus and train in the evening. I felt wonderful and tired. 5

10 2B Tommy Pan A Happy Day Last Saturday, Owen and his family went to Disneyland. When they got there, Owen saw some girls playing on the rides, so he joined them. They played very happily and took many photos with Mickey Mouse. In the evening, he ate a buffet dinner with his family, it was yummy! Then, they stayed at the hotel. They looked so tired but they felt great. What a happy day! 6

11 2C Samuel Let s Take Care of Hong Kong Dear Hong Kong People, I am a Primary two student. I live in Fanling. Hong Kong is our wonderful city. We love it very much. We must not use too many plastic bags. We must recycle paper, plastic and cans. Let s take care of Hong Kong because it is a nice place for good people to live. Yours, Samuel 2C Kelly Lam A Happy Day Last Saturday, Alisa went to Fun Fun Park. She went there with Dad, Mum and some friends. They are Linda, Kelly and John. Alisa ate some sandwiches. Linda ate some hamburgers. Kelly and John played on the swings. Then, all the children played on the slides. Dad and Mum sat on the bench reading books. 7

12 3A Vianne Lee A Poor Cat Yesterday, Tom and his mum were on the way to Happy Primary School at half past seven in the morning. It was cold and windy. They wore warm clothes, gloves and a scarf. When they walked past a tree, they found a poor cat in a box. The cat was small and thin. It looked very hungry. So Tom fed the cat with his milk. Tom asked Mum, The cat is poor. Can I take it home? Mum said, Do you know how to take care of a cat? he said, Yes! So Tom took his new pet, Kate, to his home. Finally, he was very happy. 8

13 3A Sammi Lam Naughty Lily Lily was naughty. Last Friday, Lily played tricks on her classmates. She used two toy mice to play tricks on Yoyo. She felt scared. Lily drew a turtle on a piece of paper and stuck on Joe s back. She laughed at Joe, she said, There is a turtle on your back, Joe! Then, Yoyo fell down, Lily laughed at Yoyo, Ha! Ha! Ha! Ha! Yoyo was sad. At recess, Lily was bored, she said, Joe, talk to me, please! Joe said, No way! Joe didn t talk to her. Lily said, Yoyo, please play with me! Yoyo said, No! I don t like rude girls. Yoyo didn t play with her. Lily was sad, she wrote a sorry card to Joe and Yoyo. In the end, they forgave her. Lily has friends again! 9

14 3B Kate Ben and May Once upon a time, there were two children called Ben and May. Ben was clever and May was careful. They lived in a forest. One day, they went for a walk in the forest. They saw a biscuit house. They ran to the biscuit house and ate some of the biscuits because they were hungry. Suddenly, a dragon came out of the house. He caught Ben and May and locked them in a rice cage. Then, he left. Ben and May wanted to escape before the dragon came back. Luckily, Ben had an idea. He said, Let s eat all the rice! An hour later, Ben and May ate up the rice cage. They were free. In the end, they escaped and went home. 10

15 3B Mandy Naughty Lily Lily was naughty. Last Friday, Lily showed two mice to Ginny. Ginny was scared and fell on the ground. She cried loudly but Lily laughed at her. Next, Lily played tricks on Tom. She stuck a picture of a turtle on his back. She laughed at Tom too. At recess, Lily saw some classmates skipping in the playground. She asked her classmates, Can I play with you? Her classmates said, No! No! No! Lily was sad. Then, she wanted to talk to Tom but Tom didn t talk to Lily. She was very upset. She didn t have any friends. This morning, Lily ran to the teachers room and found Miss Chan. She told Miss Chan what happened. Miss Chan told her to say sorry to her friends. Then, she said sorry to her classmates. Finally, her classmates forgave her and said, Come on, let s play together! 11

16 3C Candice New Story of Hansel and Gretel Once upon a time, there were two children called Hansel and Gretel. They went for a walk at the beach. One day, Hansel and Gretel saw an ice-cream house and they ate some icecream. Suddenly, a princess came out of the house. She locked them in a big box. In the end, Hansel took the key and opened the box. Hansel and Gretel escaped and went home. 12

17 3C Joyce New Story of Hansel and Gretel Once upon a time, there were two children called Hansel and Gretel. One day, they swam in a lake. They were tired. Then, they saw a snack house. They ate some chocolate and potato chips because they were hungry. They were happy. Suddenly, an angry lady swam outside. She hit them and locked them in a room because they ate her favourite chocolate and potato chips. She was angry but she also gave Hansel and Gretel some food. She was cruel and mean so she gave them toxic cookies. Hansel and Gretel didn t know they were toxic cookies so they ate them. Then, their father went to find them. He found the angry lady. The angry lady was his wife! The cookies were not toxic cookies. They were just some chocolate cookies! Hansel and Gretel slept because they felt so tired but they hurt their legs. So they went to see the doctor. 13

18 4A Eleanor Chung New Story of Three Little Pigs Once upon a time, there were three little chickens. They built a beautiful house to live in because they didn t want to stay outdoors in winter. The Big Bad Dog was very jealous after seeing the house. He knocked on the door and waited. He tried to scare the chickens away so that he could take over the house. However, the three little chickens were smart. They didn t open the door. The Big Bad Dog was angry so he found some bombs to bomb the house. Then, he laughed and left. The three little chickens were sad. They were injured too. Suddenly, the Little Red Riding Hood appeared. She cured the chickens first, and then mumbled some magic words. After that, the three little chickens were transformed into a big magic hen. To revenge the Big Bad Dog, the magic hen flew over his heard and slapped his cheek hard. Finally, the Big Bad Dog became very ugly. Everybody laughed at him. 14

19 4A Thomas Tai New Story of Three Little Pigs Once upon a time, Three Little Pig Riding Hood wanted to build a big house. Suddenly, a big bad wolf wanted to use the magic to break their house. They felt scared because they didn t know how to do it. They hurried up to build their house. Then, Three Little Pigs Riding Hood saw Fairy Godfather do some sports in the park. Finally, Fairy Godfather used magic to attack the wolf. The pigs took him home and cooked him to eat. 15

20 4B Michelle Liu Birthday Resolutions 5 th May, 2016 Sunny Today is my birthday. I am ten years old now. I am a big girl so I am going to improve myself. My drawing is bad. I like drawing but I always have no ideas about it! I don t know how to draw anything beautifully. It is terrible but I am not going to give up. I am going to join some drawing lessons in Happy Learning Centre with my best friend, Sarah, every weekend. Then, my drawing will be better. My basketball skills are terrible. I can t jump high and do a jump-shot. Sometimes, my classmates laugh at me. When I couldn t play basketball, I felt upset so I am going to do more basketball practice. Then, my basketball skills will improve. My classmates won t laugh at me. I hope I will be a better me after one year. 16

21 4B Jacqueline Cheung Birthday Resolutions 5 th May, 2016 Sunny Today is my birthday. I am nine years old now. I am a big girl so I am going to improve myself. I am disappointed with my English. My English test and exam were bad. I am going to do revision with my sister and play more English games. I was upset about my table. My table is messy but I don t want to clean it. So I am going to ask my sister to help me to clean my table. Then, I will give her one dollar and two sweets. My table will be clean. I was not happy about my health. I am thin and short. I am going to eat more fruit, vegetables, meat and dairy products. Then, I will be tall and healthy. I like swimming but swimming made my skin black. My classmates often laugh at me. I am going to put on some sunscreen before swimming. I believe my skin will turn white. 17

22 4C Agnes Tseng New Story of Snow White Once upon a time, there was an ugly princess named Snow White. She was bad and rude, so she had no friends. One day, the queen wanted Snow White to leave the castle because she was rude and impolite. One day, the queen said to Snow White, Get out of the castle. Snow White was very angry so she left the castle. She ran into the forest. On the way, she saw a cottage. When she opened the door, she saw seven dogs. Snow White said, I need to stay here! The dogs thought she was too rude so they didn t let her go inside. Snow White was upset. She found a cave and stayed there. The queen asked the magic TV, Where is Snow White? She is in the forest, said the magic TV. The queen turned into an old woman. She found Snow White and said, Do you want to drink this juice? When you drink it, you will be beautiful. Snow White wanted to be a beautiful girl so she drank the juice. Then she died. The queen was happy. Suddenly, there was a prince passing by. He saw her. He wanted to save her so he called Superman to save her. He gave her some medicine. Superman also killed the queen. Snow White woke up. The prince thought she was beautiful. He loved her so they got married. They returned to the castle and lived happily ever after. 18

23 4C Belle Choi Birthday Resolution Today is my birthday. I am ten years old. I am big girl so I am going to improve myself. I am too thin so I am going to eat more healthy food such as vegetables, fruit and grain products. Then I will be strong. I am also too short so I am going to do more sports. I m going to go swimming twice a week and do skipping once a week. Then, I will be taller. On the other hand, my English is poor so I m going to do more English exercises.then my English will be improved. I always fail in my Maths examination so I am going to do more Maths exercises. Then I won t fail in my Maths examination. In addition, my bookshelf is dirty so I am going to clean it. Then, my books won t be dirty. Also, our shelf in the kitchen is messy. I am going to tidy it. Then the shelf will be tidied. I don t have enough sleep so I am going to go to bed early. Then I won t have eyes like a panda. I spend much time watching TV so I am going to watch less TV. Then I won t wear glasses. I will work hard for all! 19

24 5A Tse Wing Kai Super Cleaning Robot I designed a Super Cleaning Robot because my home is untidy. I designed it to clean my house. I will use it every day! Descriptions: The Super Cleaning Robot is yellow and red. It is as big as my dad and it looks like a man. It is made of metal. It is used for cleaning my house. It can sweep the floor and absorb the rubbish. I use my voice to order the robot. I think it s a perfect invention. Look out for my invention in shops soon! 20

25 5A Chung Man Kai Super Schoolbag I designed a Super Schoolbag because I always forget to bring what I need to school and I want to get up on time. I am going to use my Super Schoolbag every day. Descriptions: The Super Schoolbag is pink and purple because these are my favourite colours. It is as big as a normal schoolbag. It is made of cloth and metal but it is very light. It is used for telling me what I need to bring to school and waking me up. It plays my favourite songs to wake me up. I can also choose the songs I like. I think it is the best invention. Look out for my invention in shops soon! 21

26 5B Fung Cheuk Fai Talking TV I designed a Talking TV because I m very bored. I often stay at home alone and my parents go to work every day. Descriptions: The talking TV is black, green and blue. You can change the colour as you wish. It is as small as a bag and it looks like a robot s face. It is made of metal so it is hard. It can t break easily. When I turn it on, it can talk to me. If I am upset, it will play my favourite movie! I think it s a wonderful invention. Look out for my invention in shops soon! 22

27 5B Pak Man Lai Super Bowl I designed a Super Bowl. I designed this product to help me eat faster. Descriptions: This super bowl is black and purple because these colours are sharp and attractive. It is as big as a box and it looks like a wok too. It is made of plastic. It is safe for children to use it. There is a mini fan under the bowl. It is used for cooling down the food. But the mini fan needs to change batteries frequently. It is a clock too. It can tell me the time. I think this is an interesting invention. Look out for my invention shops soon. 23

28 5C Fung Cheuk Lam Phone Headphones I designed Phone Headphones because after holding a mobile phone for a long time, my hands feel tired. Descriptions: The Phone Headphones are white and light blue because these are my favourite colours. It is as big as my head and it looks like a lantern fish. It is made of metal, cloth and plastic. It has a cloth surface to make us comfortable. This is used for holding phones without our hands. It can also play music when you wear it. I think it is a fantastic invention. 24

29 5C Chiu Yan Wing 3 in 1 Watercolour Pencil I designed a 3 in 1 Watercolour Pencil. When we do a watercolour painting, we need three things: water, a watercolour pencil and a paintbrush. It is so troublesome. Description: The 3 in 1 Watercolour Pencil is pink and white because these are my favourite colours. It is as small as a normal pencil. It is made of wood and plastic and it is cheap. It is used for painting easily. It is convenient because when I press the button, it can spray some water onto the paintbrush. Do not put the paintbrush into water. I think it s a fantastic invention. Look out for my invention in shops soon! 25

30 6A Isis Lo An Unforgettable Experience Michael and I went to the cinema today. We wanted to watch to the film, The Sky Adventure. I was looking forward to the movie. It was enjoyable but things changed after a cockroach appeared in front of me. This cockroach could fly! Michael and I were both afraid of cockroaches. I saw Michael shaking crazily. Soon, everybody screamed as loud as they could. This made the officer come and take a look. The officer asked, What s the matter? Why were you screaming crazily? everyone told the officer what happened. The officer said, I will kill it! I am not afraid of anything! While the officer was finding the cockroach, it flew directly onto the face of the officer. The officer screamed loudly, Help! Help! Can anyone help me? Everyone laughed and the other officer killed the cockroach. The audience continued enjoying the movie. 26

31 6A Leung Sum Yuet An Argument between Gigi and Amy Gigi and Amy had an argument at recess last Monday. They were working on an English project. Gigi was a lazy girl and Amy was diligent. Gigi gave her work to Amy. Amy was very angry with her. Gigi said she was busy. She had to do her homework and studied for the dictation. Then, she needed to go to visit her grandfather because he was sick. Amy refused to help her because she thought everyone should be responsible. Their English teacher gave them a month to do it. Amy did her part responsibly. Gigi shouted at her and said she was not loyal. They argued. Gigi told other classmates. She said Amy wasn t loyal. They tried to bully Amy. Then, Amy cried loudly because they took her pencils and threw her pencil case. The most unacceptable behaviour was they kicked Amy in the playground and she got hurt! This time, Gigi thought they were too cruel. Gigi said sorry to Amy and told them to stop it. Gigi and Amy s group could hand in their work on time and they did well. They became friends again. They had learnt they should be loyal to all of their friends. 27

32 6B Leung Wing Ka Let s Protect the Environment in Hong Kong! There are many environmental problems in Hong Kong. If we keep polluting, many people will have health problems. Thus, we should do something good for the environment. Land pollution is a very serious problem in Hong Kong. People throw away so much rubbish such as disposable products, cans, bottles, etc. People waste a lot of food too. If we keep doing that, we will not have enough landfills for them. We should start recycling the reusable things. However, air pollution is bad for us too. There is so much traffic and factories which produce so many fumes. They make the air dirty. If we don t stop polluting the air, more and more people will have health problems. However, if we start planting more trees and using public transport instead of cars, the air can be more fresh and clean. Land pollution and air pollution are Hong Kong s serious problems. It is important for us to protect Hong Kong and there are many ways that we can help with it! Let s save our world now! 28

33 6B Shum Yue Cheung My Most Memorable Experience with My Family Last Sunday, I was free since I did all my homework. My mother and father did not need to go to work so we decided to go cycling in Tai Mei Tuk. We arrived at Tai Mei Tuk at about eleven twenty in the morning. The car park was full so we could not park our car there. My father thought of a great idea. He said, You can go to rent the bikes first. I will come later! OK! I replied. Then, my mother and I chose the bikes. My mother chose a black one. I chose a green one. My mother helped my father to choose the blue one. They were colourful. We crossed the zebra crossing. After that we saw a shop. We went down to the shop carefully. We arrive at Tai Mei Tuk! I shouted loudly. We took photos together. The view was very nice. I was excited about it so I rode the bike fast. I could not see that there were some people in front of me. Clash! My bike and another bike bumped each other. My bike was broken and I fell down on the floor. Are you OK? my mother and father said worriedly. My hands were bleeding. It was so painful! My mother used her phone to call the ambulance. After five minutes, the ambulance arrived. They took me to hospital. After the accident, I was ashamed. I said sorry to my mother and father because I made them worried. They were so good. They did not scold me. I 29

34 should watch out and be more careful when I ride a bike! I have to take good care of myself so that my parents do not need to worry about me. 30

35 6C Lok Ho Yeung Friendship Forever Ryan is my best friend. We have been friends since primary two. Although he is not studying in APSSS now, we are still keeping contact. I had an unforgettable experience with him. Last March, we decided to play table tennis in my club house because it was his birthday. We met there at two o clock. We paid the fee and walked to the field excitedly. Not so long after the game started, a gang came and occupied the table and did not let us play. I did not know what I ought to do because I was shocked. However, Ryan was brave and stood in front of me immediately and said, The table is not yours. You did not book it but we did! Don t block us! He shouted at the gang angrily and they were obviously scared of him and ran away. Eventually, we kept playing until our time was up. After that incident, we strengthened our friendship more. 31

36 6C Cheung Hin Yeung A Great Friend Once upon a time, there was a cheerful boy, named Tom, who lived in a big village. He had a great life with his family until one day, a naughty boy, named Ken, moved into his village. Ken always treats Tom very badly and wants him to get into trouble. He kept playing tricks on Tom and made him really mad. A lot of people in the village wanted to scold him, including Tom. But one day, when Ken wanted to trap Tom into the well, he suddenly lost his balance and fell into the well! Can someone help me? he asked. Everyone refused to help him but Tom used a rope to save him. Thank you! I am sorry for playing tricks on you. Please forgive me! Ken apologized. Tom forgave him and promised to become friends with him. Finally, they become best friends and always helped each other. They also made some new friends in the village too! 32

37 ISBN APSSS PRESS Copyright 2016 by Alliance Primary School, Sheung Shui 33